student blogging challenge

student blogging challenge!

8: Activity 1. What makes a great post? A good post includes correct grammar a bibliography and links to other website's and where you got or information. When you are out visiting other blogs, what make's you stop and read a post? If I see big and colorful letter's  they get me interested in reading the post. Also you want to have a good title. How do you find good post on a blog? I find good post by skip reading just take out the important stuff out of  the paragraph's then If I seem to like it I will read the post word by word.

7: Activity 6. Imagine your are debating this topic: it is better to have a negative digital footprint than no footprint at all. Give three reasons to support each side of the debate. I think it's better to have a negative foot print than no footprint because then people will think you are a gamer or something like that. People will think you are a technology rebel and did lot's of bad thing's. Finally people will think your are epic for taking chance's and do bad thing's. Before I close off I want you to know just because I said this doesn't mean it's true I mostly think you should have a clean footprint so you don't get in trouble.




6: I think on of the best inventions back in the day was just those little phones where they have huge long wires. but know we have iphones, galaxy, and many more. When a long time ago the only phone you could find has a wire. So that's what I think changed the world a lot like long distance family problems and log distance relation ships the changed the world a lot.




5: I just read an article of statement about children under the age of 18 and their humans right's. I read article 3 on this website  http://www.ncylc.org.au/croc/what.html. This article say's "All decisions made about you must be in your best interest." I real like this one out of them because I think parents shouldn't force us to do things that we know we shouldn't do You have the decision to go ether go some where for supper or something else. You can do many thing's with this law.  You can chose to ether smoke or not as well. Most parent's will tell to never smoke. But if live by someone like my neighbor's. They are very bad talk about drunk kids bad. I'm not sure about their child smoking though. They just cause all the time at each other where p.j.'s all the time witch doesn't mean anything just describing them. Also smoke a lot as in almost 24-7. And if you don't know what that mean 24 hours a day 7 day's a week. Some other was you can use this law is by saying you don't want to go to some other restaurant you just want to stay home and eat at your house. Most of the time I only do that when I'm not that hungry. Also if they are going to sea food restaurant's unless  it's king buffet the make see food taste like heaven. mostly their crab lagoon's. witch is crab meat and some other stuff inside some breading. The final thing I would like to talk about this law is that you shouldn't try for school like say you don't have to go to school. You should only say that in terrible situations like a family member is very ill. like about to die ill you can stop school to help your family like they did long ago but other wise I wouldn't not use this law for getting out school for free.





4: back me up is about how to stop cyber bullying. To get involved, all you have to do is make a short video (no more than 2 minutes) about how you could help someone who is being cyber-bullied.


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3: for school I normally wake up at 6:55 - 7:00 a.m. to get to school.for breakfast I  get what's in the school cafe' and apple juice and cereal. for lunch I get baked Cheddar cheese chips. chocolate milk and what ever they have in the cafe'. supper  have a glass of milk and some sort of salad with a meal on the side. I normally ride my bike to school in less I have a bike accident. at the end of school I ride my bike to my favorite hang out place the boy's and girl's club I talk to my friends play games and have blast till I leave around 7:00 p.m. lastly if I could improve my school I would make coming to school fun by making the buses a party bus. and in the front door I would put an auto mp3 player charger or iPod charger so that way first thing when you walk in you can listen to music and your iPod or mp3 player wont die.



2:  5 places you should visit in my town is king's buffet, central park,  show town,  boy's and girls club, and the lodge. first king's buffet you should go their because if you like Chinese food you would like that place they have sushi, rice, ice cream and many more. second central park you should go their because it is one of the most popular place in the town. third you should go to show town because they have many show's and movie's for you to see. fourth boy's and girl's club is my second home but you have to be a member to get in but their are many thing's to do their like play sport's, 8-ball pool, pac man, ping pong, and many more. lastly the lodge if you are a coffee person you should go their because they got it all they got tea, smoothies, donuts, cookie's, cake, and of course coffee.  Those are the top three places I recommend you to go to.

6 comments:

  1. Good post Andrew, there are lot of things to do in your town. This is the second blog I have read that mentions Kings Buffet, they must be good. You have a lot of good ideas in this post but they are all squished together.

    Try separating them into different paragraphs. It will make it easier to read.

    Keep blogging,
    Rhonda

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  2. Good post Andrew. I love the idea of having a charger on the bus, and playing music, what a great way to start the day. Do you have a lot of accidents, I hope not.

    I look forward to reading your next post. Keep blogging.
    Rhonda

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    1. myh dad was reading this post from you and he doesn't get what you mean by accidents. Also I came up with the music Idea because I just love music because you can tell about some one throught their music some times. My personal favriote type of music is pop.


      From, Andrew j.

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  3. Good post Andrew. I have have never heard of Back Me Up, it sounds like a great, easy way to make a difference. I would love to have learned more about them. You can include links to other sites inside your posts. You can find out more about linking in this post from the Student Blogging Challenge https://support.google.com/blogger/answer/41379?hl=en.

    Have made a video for Back Me Up? If so you could embed it in your post so that people can see it. You can find out more about embedding media in this post from the Student Blogging Challenge http://teacherchallenge.edublogs.org/2013/10/07/step-8-cools-tools-to-embed/#embed.

    I look forward to reading your next post. Keep blogging,
    Rhonda

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    1. Thanks Rhonda I've been checking or comments but I haven't had time to reply till now. I like your advice and thank you for the link I'm checking it out right now.

      From, Andrew J.

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  4. Student Blogging Challenge 8
    Good post Andrew. I can tell you have thought about what makes a good blog post. That's a tightly packed paragraph with a lot of information. It would be easier to read if you split it up. You could list the question first, and the start a new paragraph for the answer. You could even use the questions as headings before you answer in the paragraphs that follow.
    I look forward to reading your next post. Keep blogging,
    Rhonda

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