11/17/14
Innovation hour
Does it matter if I can't decided what to right about I changed my book a third time today but I'm sticking to it. I love this Idea so far I'm 992 words or so. It's turning out really good.It's about a little boy growing up with just a dog because he lost his parents and it's one of the last things he has of them. But it's turning out very very well.
11/13/14
Fight For Freedom: By: Daniel Rosen - Chapter 1-3
Chapter 1 Part 1/2:
What was America like in the year 1763?
In the year 1763 it was really bad. Free black men couldn't vote which Beat's the purpose of being called FREE black men. They 'French And Indian War' also just was won by the English and now that they have people settled in they needed to pay for the war. So they made the colonist pay in their taxes. It also took so long for shipments of food and other supplies to come in so they decided to make their own laws and such. In conclusion in the year 1763 it wasn't very good and very different from today.
Chapter 1 Part 2/2:
Why did the English americans want independence? Did every American want independence?
The Americans wanted independence because they where tiled with all the acts they wanted it to be over with they didn't like them at all it lead to many, many, many bad thing's. I was agreed by a group of patriots, also known as American's, Cam up with this idea in 1774 but no one agreed to it but in march 1785 Patrick Henry mad another speech that went to history, but not everyone wanted to be independent they where called Loyalist or Tories. In conclusion They wanted independence because of the bad thing's that where happening and not everyone wanted independence.
Chapter 2:
What/When/Where was the decision made to become independent? How did the war Begin?
The decision was made on July 4, 1776 By Franklin, Adams, and Jefferson. What was all over the war and everything else; they finally won their war. The war only started because of a small little shot on the green of Lexington the shoot heard around the world from the British in my opinion but the war was over and they had independents.
Chapter 3:
What where the chances of America winning the war?
America had a small chance but they had a good leader and men that wouldn't give up they where 100% committed. And they did it they won the war even with a small chance they did it. Even though the English had more solders and such. The English had a greater number yet we won the ar.
Chapter 3:
Was valley forge a good time or bad time for George Washington. It was little bit of both good and bad. It started of bad because they made many mistakes until the french said you know what we could win let's team up with them and win it shouldn't be that hard
What was America like in the year 1763?
In the year 1763 it was really bad. Free black men couldn't vote which Beat's the purpose of being called FREE black men. They 'French And Indian War' also just was won by the English and now that they have people settled in they needed to pay for the war. So they made the colonist pay in their taxes. It also took so long for shipments of food and other supplies to come in so they decided to make their own laws and such. In conclusion in the year 1763 it wasn't very good and very different from today.
Chapter 1 Part 2/2:
Why did the English americans want independence? Did every American want independence?
The Americans wanted independence because they where tiled with all the acts they wanted it to be over with they didn't like them at all it lead to many, many, many bad thing's. I was agreed by a group of patriots, also known as American's, Cam up with this idea in 1774 but no one agreed to it but in march 1785 Patrick Henry mad another speech that went to history, but not everyone wanted to be independent they where called Loyalist or Tories. In conclusion They wanted independence because of the bad thing's that where happening and not everyone wanted independence.
Chapter 2:
What/When/Where was the decision made to become independent? How did the war Begin?
The decision was made on July 4, 1776 By Franklin, Adams, and Jefferson. What was all over the war and everything else; they finally won their war. The war only started because of a small little shot on the green of Lexington the shoot heard around the world from the British in my opinion but the war was over and they had independents.
Chapter 3:
What where the chances of America winning the war?
America had a small chance but they had a good leader and men that wouldn't give up they where 100% committed. And they did it they won the war even with a small chance they did it. Even though the English had more solders and such. The English had a greater number yet we won the ar.
Chapter 3:
Was valley forge a good time or bad time for George Washington. It was little bit of both good and bad. It started of bad because they made many mistakes until the french said you know what we could win let's team up with them and win it shouldn't be that hard
11/12/14
Wall Of Peace
In Honor of veterans day, our class created a wall of peace. So in my gratitude I am going to write a paragraph.
Question-Veterans have shown their loyalty to our country. How can we show ours?
We can show loyalty to our country in many way's. It could be cleaning up the world to make it a safer place and a good environment for kids. Could be just staying strong while a family member is gone. I know it can be scary but the best part is seeing them come back. That's why we should show loyalty to our country to make it a safer place for all kids and be nice to the people around us as well. In conclusion you can show loyalty by just cleaning up the earth or being nice to people around us so we can get through this all together.
This is a lion it stands for brave and courage. It's to show that we can be brave if we choose to. Just be strong and they will come back and work hard together to make a big difference. Show loyalty to your friends, family, and the world. Be a lion and show courage and be brave. To help the not so cool kids or the new kid it will make a big difference. In conclusion be a lion and show your brave and have courage.
Question-Veterans have shown their loyalty to our country. How can we show ours?
We can show loyalty to our country in many way's. It could be cleaning up the world to make it a safer place and a good environment for kids. Could be just staying strong while a family member is gone. I know it can be scary but the best part is seeing them come back. That's why we should show loyalty to our country to make it a safer place for all kids and be nice to the people around us as well. In conclusion you can show loyalty by just cleaning up the earth or being nice to people around us so we can get through this all together.
This is a lion it stands for brave and courage. It's to show that we can be brave if we choose to. Just be strong and they will come back and work hard together to make a big difference. Show loyalty to your friends, family, and the world. Be a lion and show courage and be brave. To help the not so cool kids or the new kid it will make a big difference. In conclusion be a lion and show your brave and have courage.11/10/14
Innovation Hour
I am writing a novel for Innovation hour. I like the mystery I added into my novel You are completely lost one what is happening. Until you get to a certain part in the story you find out what has happened. I wonder If I could be more descriptive on the character's and their characteristics. The story is come out nice I will put a copy of the book on the site after it's done publishing, but it's turning out great.
Here is what I got so far:
Here is what I got so far:
It’s hard to believe what has happened all because of me. I’m just a little boy I didn’t mean this to happen. If only I knew then what I know now. It wasn’t always like this until hat on moment. I’ve always lived by the pond in the forest with my family we had a farm with goats and cows. We also grew corn but my favorite thing was the pond. That pond was like a key or sign to a wonderful life, I would always look in their and see the different type of fish in their. I named every fish. I named the bluegill Clyde, the puffer fish Susan, The goldfish lucky, and my favorite is the tuna fish it was small and tiny. I’m the shortest in my family just like the tuna. I always got the short straw. That’s why I named the fish after me Fred Flinger.
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